Indie Book Review: Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage by Kemka Ezinwo

Twerking CruxesTwerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage by Kemka Ezinwo
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Disclaimer: I received a free electronic copy of this novel in exchange for an honest review.

Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage by Kemka Ezinwo follows the lives of individuals from a Nigerian community. The novel takes place over several years, beginning when the members of the youngest generation are schoolchildren and ending when they are nearing middle age. Over the course of the novel, the characters are put through multiple challenges, including; fighting for love, finding and reuniting with lost family members, struggling with religious belief, and learning the true nature of those around them.

The crowning jewel of Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage is the way Ezinwo weaves the lives of the multiple characters. All of the characters are interconnected in some way, and even when their paths diverge over time and distance, Ezinwo finds a way to bring them back together again. Keeping track of these characters and their many narratives must have been an extremely difficult task as a writer, and I commend Ezinwo for her ability to keep the characters straight and align their narratives in such a clever way.

From a reader’s standpoint, keeping track of so many characters is somewhat challenging, and there were several times throughout the novel where I had to pause and remind myself who a character was and how s/he was connected to someone else. Likewise, because Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage takes place over multiple decades, a lot happens in the one novel. This made the plot and details feel rushed. I felt like, just when the plot would really develop, it would be rushed onto the next event. Moreover, I felt like I did not have ample time to get to know the characters at more than the surface level. Honestly, I believe the events of this one book could have encompassed an entire series if given room to breath and develop properly.

On a grammatical level, the writing struggled. I spotted errors in almost every-other sentence, which consistently forced me to pause and re-read and threw me out of the narrative. Additionally, much of the dialogue lacked proper tagging, which made it difficult to know who was speaking. The dialogue also felt similar for all characters, which dampened the emotions the author tried to portray and hindered the uniqueness of the characters. One aspect of the dialogue that I did enjoy was when it would lapse into specific “dialects” to show when the characters were experiencing intense emotions.

Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage manages to follow multiple characters as they grow and beautifully interconnect their story lines in a way that feels authentic to their characters. However, the fast pace of events and lack of personality in dialogue prevents the readers from connecting with the events and characters as deeply as they could. In the end, if you like romance, drama, and a dash of mystery, you just may like the winding narrative and turning events of Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage.

View all my reviews


Twerking CruxesIf you are interested in reading Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage and would like to help sponsor my writing and research, you can purchase it at my Amazon Associates Store. By doing this, you will not pay a cent extra, nor will the author receive a cent less, but I will receive a small commission on the sale. Simply click the book’s title or the book’s image.

 

Advertisements

2 thoughts on “Indie Book Review: Twerking Cruxes and a Cloaked Visage by Kemka Ezinwo

  1. Sherrie Miranda says:

    Kate, it is unfortunate that the writer wasn’t able to get critiques and a good editor or two. Sounds like that would have made all the difference. These were the same kind of problems that I had with my first draft. It was hard to follow and covered too many years (about 50). I cut the novel in half and plan to do a prequel. I brought all the characters “secrets & lies” into the present as they tell them to my protagonist. Then I went back to each characters “secret” and wrote a conclusion to it.
    It is hard, especially as a first time author, to accept that your story isn’t perfect just the way it is. You have to give it time until you can accept the suggested changes as your own. It took me about 6 years to make that happen! And that was just the active writing aspect. I spent another 20-some years before that, mostly just thinking and writing snippets and a very bad screenplay.
    In the end, all the time we writers take to get it right is worth it. There is NOTHING worse for the ego than putting out a book that isn’t ready yet.
    My ego is too fragile to handle that kind of a blow. As it is, I have found two mistakes in my book and it is driving me batty. No one else has noticed, but damn, I sure do!
    Sherrie
    Do you know about my debut novel “Secrets & Lies in El Salvador”? A young American woman goes to war-torn El Salvador: tinyurl.com/klxbt4y

    Liked by 1 person

Share Your Thoughts!

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s